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"In a survival situation, the most important things are water, courage, and a first-aid kit. I've got water and an endless supply of courage, but I don't have a first-aid kit. Sometimes I don't have a whole lot of motivation, either. I may be a daring explorer, but sometimes I just want to loaf around all day and sleep. Wait... What if the president reads this journal? Uh... Ahem... I'd never dream of slacking on the job! Yeah..." | "In a survival situation, the most important things are water, courage, and a first-aid kit. I've got water and an endless supply of courage, but I don't have a first-aid kit. Sometimes I don't have a whole lot of motivation, either. I may be a daring explorer, but sometimes I just want to loaf around all day and sleep. Wait... What if the president reads this journal? Uh... Ahem... I'd never dream of slacking on the job! Yeah..." | ||
As you can see, a coma was added between "motivation" and "either" (line 2). | As you can see, a coma was added between "motivation" and "either" (line 2). [[User:Marty|Marty]] ([[User talk:Marty|talk]]) 17:16, 7 June 2016 (EDT) |
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If you think you've found an error in any of the information copied directly from the game, please leave a note of it here, under the line. Include the page name and error you have found.
On Strife Monolith, "Our world isn't simply black or white, right or wrong Everybody is different." In between wrong and everybody, there should be a period. I'm looking at the game screen right now.
- Corrected, also noticed that And wasn't capitalized <_<. Thanks for the notice.--Prezintenden
On the page Water Dumple/louie I just played the game and I edited the notes. It didn't make sense previously; how do you deep-fry dumples for all the flavor with HALF the fat? It was missing "without batter", so I added that... Portal-Kombat
- Is that what it actually says in the game? God, I can't believe I messed that up. ...Actually, no, I can. I do stuff like that a lot. —Jimbo Jambo
One of the Wikia's projects is the notes for the Pikmin 1 parts. Well, the ones that do exist have no color. I really think/recommend adding color to the text, to be even more original. If you remember, color is added via:
<span style="color:color">text</span> [SRB2]EspyoT 20:39, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
Well, the colour in the game is only to highlight important words, isn't it? Would it be appropriate to have those coloured, and is there any need for it?GP
The Exhausted Superstick/journal seems wrong...--the master --MewFan128 17:02, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- I see nothing. What do you mean?--Prezintenden
Oh, my computer doesn't show the third line...--the master --MewFan128 03:17, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
On Olimar's journal entry for the Extreme Perspirator, it says, "People could walk up a good sweat with this thing." Shouldn't that be work up? Emperor Bulblax (talk) 14:23, 29 September 2012 (EDT)
- Just checked in-game, you're right. Fixed. You could post that on the treasure's talk page next time though, it'd be better organized. — {EspyoT} 08:08, 30 September 2012 (EDT)
Sud Generator and Harmonic Synthesizer
Both of these journal entries had a glaring error. I already fixed them; the Sud Generator had "and" instead of "an", and for the Harmonic Synthesizer, the correct spelling is "their", not "thier". --Luigifan (talk) 16:11, 21 July 2013 (EDT)
Open Architecture
I think both the journal and the sales pitch for this item are erroneous. However, given that this is a PAL-exclusive item, they may actually conform to European grammar standards. Could somebody please check this for me? --Luigifan (talk) 16:10, 21 July 2013 (EDT)
- It sounded wrong (as in how it flowed) if you said it out loud, so I removed it. The editor didn't classify it as spelled wrong, though it did classify the word "amongst" as wrong, so I'm not sure it can be trusted. -Los Plagas
On Iridesent Glint Beetle/Olimar, Olimar isn't capitalized. Sorry. I don't know of that was something worth bringing up, but it was just something I noticed.
Until next time, Pikman14 23:45, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
Survival Ointment
The notes for the Survival Ointment here are for the Gamecube version. For the Wii version, they just added a coma. The notes for the Wii version are:
"In a survival situation, the most important things are water, courage, and a first-aid kit. I've got water and an endless supply of courage, but I don't have a first-aid kit. Sometimes I don't have a whole lot of motivation, either. I may be a daring explorer, but sometimes I just want to loaf around all day and sleep. Wait... What if the president reads this journal? Uh... Ahem... I'd never dream of slacking on the job! Yeah..."
As you can see, a coma was added between "motivation" and "either" (line 2). Marty (talk) 17:16, 7 June 2016 (EDT)