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Hello! I've noticed you've made some changes to the documented colours of some subjects, in ways that might leave other articles inconsistent or be less optimally derived from the games themselves. It's considerably important to discuss before making changes to style formats like these, so I suggest you join the Discord server so this (as well as any future edits you may plan on making) can be discussed. If that's not an option, I think we should converse about it here, just to ensure everything is consistent and correct. Thanks! <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif">[[User:Deeb1324354657|<span style="color:#1e02f5">Deeb1324354657</span>]] ([[User_talk:Deeb1324354657|<span style="color:#1e02f5">talk</span>]])</span> 00:34, September 2, 2024 (EDT) | Hello! I've noticed you've made some changes to the documented colours of some subjects, in ways that might leave other articles inconsistent or be less optimally derived from the games themselves. It's considerably important to discuss before making changes to style formats like these, so I suggest you join the Discord server so this (as well as any future edits you may plan on making) can be discussed. If that's not an option, I think we should converse about it here, just to ensure everything is consistent and correct. Thanks! <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif">[[User:Deeb1324354657|<span style="color:#1e02f5">Deeb1324354657</span>]] ([[User_talk:Deeb1324354657|<span style="color:#1e02f5">talk</span>]])</span> 00:34, September 2, 2024 (EDT) | ||
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Hello; I see you've recently been rewording various parts of area articles. Rewording sentences to improve readability is generally a good thing, but I'd recommend considering whether the changes you're making actually improve the article. Some of your edits have added extra details that could make the article more confusing, and some have removed Oxford commas which are a de facto wiki standard that make sentences more readable. You've also changed some instances of "area in ''Pikmin 2''" with "area of ''Pikmin 2''"; while this makes sense, it's inconsistent with many other articles on the wiki which use "in" instead of "of" in this situation, and it's generally better to be consistent when possible. — [[User:Soprano|'''Soprano''']]<sub>[[User talk:Soprano|''(talk)'']]</sub> 20:40, October 14, 2024 (EDT) | |||
Latest revision as of 19:40, October 14, 2024
Recent edits[edit]
Hello! I've noticed you've made some changes to the documented colours of some subjects, in ways that might leave other articles inconsistent or be less optimally derived from the games themselves. It's considerably important to discuss before making changes to style formats like these, so I suggest you join the Discord server so this (as well as any future edits you may plan on making) can be discussed. If that's not an option, I think we should converse about it here, just to ensure everything is consistent and correct. Thanks! Deeb1324354657 (talk) 00:34, September 2, 2024 (EDT)
Rewording[edit]
Hello; I see you've recently been rewording various parts of area articles. Rewording sentences to improve readability is generally a good thing, but I'd recommend considering whether the changes you're making actually improve the article. Some of your edits have added extra details that could make the article more confusing, and some have removed Oxford commas which are a de facto wiki standard that make sentences more readable. You've also changed some instances of "area in Pikmin 2" with "area of Pikmin 2"; while this makes sense, it's inconsistent with many other articles on the wiki which use "in" instead of "of" in this situation, and it's generally better to be consistent when possible. — Soprano(talk) 20:40, October 14, 2024 (EDT)