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:It sounded wrong (as in how it flowed) if you said it out loud, so I removed it. The editor didn't classify it as spelled wrong, though it ''did'' classify the word "amongst" as wrong, so I'm not sure it can be trusted. -<span style="font-family:times; color:#2C3539">'''''[[User: Los Plagas|Los]] [[User Talk:Los Plagas|<span style="color:#FF0000">Plagas</span>]]'''''</span>
:It sounded wrong (as in how it flowed) if you said it out loud, so I removed it. The editor didn't classify it as spelled wrong, though it ''did'' classify the word "amongst" as wrong, so I'm not sure it can be trusted. -<span style="font-family:times; color:#2C3539">'''''[[User: Los Plagas|Los]] [[User Talk:Los Plagas|<span style="color:#FF0000">Plagas</span>]]'''''</span>
::Sorry, disregard my last post, I  thought you were referring to the opening sentence. However, I noticed several grammatical and spelling errors, so I fixed them. I believe that the ones I fixed were not right in either language style; please fix my revisions if you have issue. -<span style="font-family:times; color:#2C3539">'''''[[User: Los Plagas|Los]] [[User Talk:Los Plagas|<span style="color:#FF0000">Plagas</span>]]'''''</span>

Revision as of 20:03, July 22, 2013

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On Strife Monolith, "Our world isn't simply black or white, right or wrong Everybody is different." In between wrong and everybody, there should be a period. I'm looking at the game screen right now.

Corrected, also noticed that And wasn't capitalized <_<. Thanks for the notice.--Prezintenden

On the page Water Dumple/louie I just played the game and I edited the notes. It didn't make sense previously; how do you deep-fry dumples for all the flavor with HALF the fat? It was missing "without batter", so I added that... Portal-Kombat

Is that what it actually says in the game? God, I can't believe I messed that up. ...Actually, no, I can. I do stuff like that a lot. —Jimbo Jambo

One of the Wikia's projects is the notes for the Pikmin 1 parts. Well, the ones that do exist have no color. I really think/recommend adding color to the text, to be even more original. If you remember, color is added via:

<span style="color:color">text</span> [SRB2]EspyoT 20:39, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Well, the colour in the game is only to highlight important words, isn't it? Would it be appropriate to have those coloured, and is there any need for it?GP

The Exhausted Superstick/journal seems wrong...--the master --MewFan128 17:02, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing. What do you mean?--Prezintenden

Oh, my computer doesn't show the third line...--the master --MewFan128 03:17, 24 June 2009 (UTC)


On Olimar's journal entry for the Extreme Perspirator, it says, "People could walk up a good sweat with this thing." Shouldn't that be work up? Emperor Bulblax (talk) 14:23, 29 September 2012 (EDT)

Just checked in-game, you're right. Fixed. You could post that on the treasure's talk page next time though, it'd be better organized. — {EspyoT} 08:08, 30 September 2012 (EDT)
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Sud Generator and Harmonic Synthesizer

Both of these journal entries had a glaring error. I already fixed them; the Sud Generator had "and" instead of "an", and for the Harmonic Synthesizer, the correct spelling is "their", not "thier". --Luigifan (talk) 16:11, 21 July 2013 (EDT)

Open Architecture

I think both the journal and the sales pitch for this item are erroneous. However, given that this is a PAL-exclusive item, they may actually conform to European grammar standards. Could somebody please check this for me? --Luigifan (talk) 16:10, 21 July 2013 (EDT)

It sounded wrong (as in how it flowed) if you said it out loud, so I removed it. The editor didn't classify it as spelled wrong, though it did classify the word "amongst" as wrong, so I'm not sure it can be trusted. -Los Plagas
Sorry, disregard my last post, I thought you were referring to the opening sentence. However, I noticed several grammatical and spelling errors, so I fixed them. I believe that the ones I fixed were not right in either language style; please fix my revisions if you have issue. -Los Plagas