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'''''Pikipedia asks that you respect people's ideas. Please do not call anyone's ideas stupid or idiotic on this page. This page is purely for Pikmin 3 ideas, not chat (unless you are commenting on someones idea). Please submit ideas on [http://fanon.pikminwiki.com/Main_Page Pikmin Fanon] if you wish to develop them more thoroughly. Thank You. '''''


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Please List Your Ideas 4 Pikmin 3! PikminTy ;)
Please List Your Ideas 4 Pikmin 3! PikminTy ;)


:No comment '''[[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]''' 12:28, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
:No comment [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> 12:28, 15 June 2008 (UTC)


::You might like to create an article about your ideas [http://pikology.scribblewiki.com/Main_Page here].{{User:Greenpickle/sig}} 13:45, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
::You might like to create an article about your ideas [http://pikology.scribblewiki.com/Main_Page here].{{User:Greenpickle/sig}} 13:45, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
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:You can in Pikmin 2...{{User:Greenpickle/sig}} 21:11, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
:You can in Pikmin 2...{{User:Greenpickle/sig}} 21:11, 15 June 2008 (UTC)


::<nowiki>*</nowiki>Wincing* '''[[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]''' 23:50, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
::<nowiki>*</nowiki>Wincing* [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> 23:50, 15 June 2008 (UTC)


I already tried all the sites, what else do you have?
I already tried all the sites, what else do you have?
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Lucario? did you know if you move your head from side to side of the comp. your piki avatar follows you with its eyes?
Lucario? did you know if you move your head from side to side of the comp. your piki avatar follows you with its eyes?


:Yeh, that is a little creepy... '''[[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]''' 10:35, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
:Yeh, that is a little creepy... [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> 10:35, 20 June 2008 (UTC)


I have some new pikmin ideas:
I have some new pikmin ideas:
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And if you guys may. Tohea.com needs more members. I have an account so I know what im talking about. Please go here.[http://www.tohea.com]
And if you guys may. Tohea.com needs more members. I have an account so I know what im talking about. Please go here.[http://www.tohea.com]


:Advertizing +Speculation = *Wincing* '''[[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]''' 11:19, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
:Advertizing +Speculation = *Wincing* [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> 11:19, 21 June 2008 (UTC)


you know what they say..."if you got nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all" [[User:PikminTy|PikminTy]]
you know what they say..."if you got nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all" [[User:PikminTy|PikminTy]]


:... *Annoyed* ... '''[[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]''' 18:09, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
:... *Annoyed* ... [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> 18:09, 26 June 2008 (UTC)


::^ You forgot to sign your post lolololol.--{{User:Prezintenden/sig}}
::^ You forgot to sign your post lolololol.--{{User:Prezintenden/sig}}


:::... *MORE Annoyed* ... '''[[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]''' 18:09, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
:::... *MORE Annoyed* ... [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> 18:09, 26 June 2008 (UTC)


If you guys look, I put my name on there. [[User:PikminTy|PikminTy]]
If you guys look, I put my name on there. [[User:PikminTy|PikminTy]]


:What?! And sign you posts with <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki> '''[[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]''' 21:47, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
:What?! And sign you posts with <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki> [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> 21:47, 26 June 2008 (UTC)


Actually, I sincerely hope that they don't make Green Pikmin. If you look at how Pikmin attack neither Olimar or Bulbmin, it becomes apparent that Pikmin look at the stalk more than anything else when deciding what is friend or foe. If you make a Pikmin whose body is the same color as its leaf, it suddenly becomes very hard to tell whether it's a Pikmin at all from a Pikmin's point of view. There isn't really a human analogy I can use.... Imagine if there was a plant with flower petals that looked exactly like leaves. Without smelling it or taking a closer look, would you be able to tell that it flowered at all? Probably not. I just don't think it would make sense to have Green Pikmin. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}
Actually, I sincerely hope that they don't make Green Pikmin. If you look at how Pikmin attack neither Olimar or Bulbmin, it becomes apparent that Pikmin look at the stalk more than anything else when deciding what is friend or foe. If you make a Pikmin whose body is the same color as its leaf, it suddenly becomes very hard to tell whether it's a Pikmin at all from a Pikmin's point of view. There isn't really a human analogy I can use.... Imagine if there was a plant with flower petals that looked exactly like leaves. Without smelling it or taking a closer look, would you be able to tell that it flowered at all? Probably not. I just don't think it would make sense to have Green Pikmin. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}




:True, diffrent shade of green maybe? '''I'm [[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]] And I approve this message.'''
:True, diffrent shade of green maybe? '''I'm''' [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> '''And I approve this message.'''


::Depends on how sensitive Pikmin's eyes are to color. It would have to stand out. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}
::Depends on how sensitive Pikmin's eyes are to color. It would have to stand out. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}


:::It could be potentially useful. No need for an onion if the Enemies are color blind. Camo could work pretty well... Aug! I'm speculating NOOOO what kind of twisted future is this! '''I'm [[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]] And I approve this message.'''
:::It could be potentially useful. No need for an onion if the Enemies are color blind. Camo could work pretty well... Aug! I'm speculating NOOOO what kind of twisted future is this! '''I'm''' [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> '''And I approve this message.'''


::::Well, presumably most of the enemies would eat anything that moves, the only reason they don't eat each other being that it would give you a lot less to do. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}
::::Well, presumably most of the enemies would eat anything that moves, the only reason they don't eat each other being that it would give you a lot less to do. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}


:::::Lol '''I'm [[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]] And I approve this message.'''
:::::Lol '''I'm''' [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> '''And I approve this message.'''


Seriously, what would it be like if you looked around an area trying to find something to harvest, only to see a couple of Bulbears eating all your prey? {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}
Seriously, what would it be like if you looked around an area trying to find something to harvest, only to see a couple of Bulbears eating all your prey? {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}


:XD I'd laugh. Then go kill it. '''I'm [[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]] And I approve this message.'''
:XD I'd laugh. Then go kill it. '''I'm''' [[User:Crystal_lucario|<b><span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span></b>]][[Image:Redpikminsprite.jpg]]<b>[[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]]</b> '''And I approve this message.'''
 
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::A mode where you put different enemies against each other just to watch what happens would be endless fun...  Go Bulborb Larva army!{{User:Greenpickle/sig}}
 
:::Go Votaliate Dweevils! '''I'm [[User:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Blue">~Crystal</span>]][[File:Redpikminsprite.jpg|x30px]][[User talk:Crystal_lucario|<span style="color:Black">Lucario~</span>]] And I approve this message.'''
 
Cool Idea. I approve.[[User:Learner4|Learner4]] 21:42, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 
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==The Creator==
==The Creator==
I began making this story at the age of 13(the age I am now). My love for pikmin and my great imagination inspired me to make this. It took a few monthes to make this. If there's credit to be given, then all goes to me, with a few inspirations from my friends. This story is exciting and has several twists to it. Enjoy!
I began making this story at the age of 13(the age I am now). My love for pikmin and my great imagination inspired me to make this. It took a few monthes to make this. If there's credit to be given, then all goes to me, with a few inspirations from my friends. This story is exciting and has several twists to it. Enjoy!
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I headed further and further in. The bushes behind the wall were huge! Most of which were pure green but some weren't as green. I saw several new types of weeds that shot out of the ground. I noticed Small yellow bulbs on the tops of each weed. Although the weeds were half the size of the bushes and were green with leafs sprouting out from the ends.Many of the bushes were dead and had no leaves what so-ever. As I moved along, I looked to both left and right and discovered that there was another wall blocking the left pathway! And on the right I saw two more Homes of the giants I had met earlier. After that, I kept moving along. As I walked further, past them I noticed the scenery began to change. The bushes got bigger, and more peach and dull. They weren't made of twigs and leaves like the others. These ones were made of straw. They seemed to me like they were fifty feet higher than the others! I headed down the path they made. The bushes made a labyrinth of pathways and intersections. The bushes acted as the wall, too thick to climb through. I couldn't see over them either. I found a few intersections and followed to the left every time. That way, I shouldn't lose track of were I am. I saw a few amazing things there as well. Like I saw several new species of animals.
I headed further and further in. The bushes behind the wall were huge! Most of which were pure green but some weren't as green. I saw several new types of weeds that shot out of the ground. I noticed Small yellow bulbs on the tops of each weed. Although the weeds were half the size of the bushes and were green with leafs sprouting out from the ends.Many of the bushes were dead and had no leaves what so-ever. As I moved along, I looked to both left and right and discovered that there was another wall blocking the left pathway! And on the right I saw two more Homes of the giants I had met earlier. After that, I kept moving along. As I walked further, past them I noticed the scenery began to change. The bushes got bigger, and more peach and dull. They weren't made of twigs and leaves like the others. These ones were made of straw. They seemed to me like they were fifty feet higher than the others! I headed down the path they made. The bushes made a labyrinth of pathways and intersections. The bushes acted as the wall, too thick to climb through. I couldn't see over them either. I found a few intersections and followed to the left every time. That way, I shouldn't lose track of were I am. I saw a few amazing things there as well. Like I saw several new species of animals.


As I moved ahead I heard noises. Much like that of a pikmin's voice, although they couldn't speak. But the sound sounded more coarse. It sounded much more like a scream. I head towards it. I had to go right in a few intersections. When I saw the noise maker, I dropped my pen and journal! I stood paralyzed. The sight was very frightening! I saw two glowing yellow eyes protruding from that horrible black face! It was a pikmin, I think. It had a flame rather than a leaf, flower, or bulb. It's skin was black and it's eyes were glowing mad. There were six of them. Two of them were sitting on a large twig. Three of them were sitting on a piece of straw that protruded from the bush. The sixth one was standing there next to a hole. He was farthest to right. Their eyes stopped me dead in my tracks. Not dead literally of course.  
As I moved ahead I heard noises. Much like that of a pikmin's voice, although they couldn't speak. But the sound sounded more coarse. It sounded much more like a scream. I head towards it. I had to go right in a few intersections. When I saw the noise maker, I dropped my pen and journal! I stood paralyzed. The sight was very frightening! I saw two glowing yellow eyes protruding from that horrible black face! It was a pikmin, I think. It had a flame rather than a leaf, flower, or bulb. It's skin was black and it's eyes were glowing mad. There were six of them. Two of them were sitting on a large twig. Three of them were sitting on a piece of straw that protruded from the bush. The sixth one was standing there next to a hole. He was farthest to right. Their eyes stopped me dead in my tracks. Not dead literally of course.  


I couldn't move. Their eyes seemed hypnotic. They moved closer. All I could think about were those devilish eyes! I noticed that they had sharp claws. They took two steps forward and I took two steps back. I knew they had bad intentions! It wasn't safe to be there. The other five stood back. They let the lead black pikmin do it's own thing. I understood it was their leader. These pikmin were highly unusual. They were much more like those of the mushroom pikmin! Their fire illuminated the dark skies. They stared an evil glance. The glance of death! I managed to turn around and run. They chased me. Many of the non-nocturnal creatures woke up to noise. I hadn't noticed until later. I was too focused on escaping. The leading pikmin raised it's left claw and shrieked it's battle cry! I noticed the sun was beginning to come out. The pikmin stopped dead in their tracks. I felt more confident now. The pikmin shrieked and ran back. I followed. I wanted to observe what would happen next. They ran to the place where I met them. I could see that the sun came out and it was early dawn. I poked my head through some straw. I could see them clearly. They ran into the hole that the leader stood next to. I ran to it once they were gone. I poked my head into the tunnel and saw them acting weird. They seemed like they were having a seizure. Then suddenly their skin turned blue. Their fire turned into flowers. Their claws turned into soft fingers. I heard a noise coming from behind me. I turned around and I saw a small bulborb. The bulborb strayed from it's pack. It seemed like it was very young. I stood there but it just took a bite out of me shoe! I was about to yell, but I covered my mouth. Now I was a little angry at it. I checked on the pikmin. They stopped. I was surprised. They turned around and caught me in the act of spying on them. The young bulborb was quite satisfied and walked away. I was ready to pound it but the pikmin ran towards me. I was afraid that they’d attack me, but it was quite the opposite. Instead they ran to me and waited for commands. "What mood-swingers!" I complained. But of course they couldn't understand. I assumed that the pikmin turn into black pikmin at night. "They don't even remember it either. That must be how they survive at night."
I couldn't move. Their eyes seemed hypnotic. They moved closer. All I could think about were those devilish eyes! I noticed that they had sharp claws. They took two steps forward and I took two steps back. I knew they had bad intentions! It wasn't safe to be there. The other five stood back. They let the lead black pikmin do it's own thing. I understood it was their leader. These pikmin were highly unusual. They were much more like those of the mushroom pikmin! Their fire illuminated the dark skies. They stared an evil glance. The glance of death! I managed to turn around and run. They chased me. Many of the non-nocturnal creatures woke up to noise. I hadn't noticed until later. I was too focused on escaping. The leading pikmin raised it's left claw and shrieked it's battle cry! I noticed the sun was beginning to come out. The pikmin stopped dead in their tracks. I felt more confident now. The pikmin shrieked and ran back. I followed. I wanted to observe what would happen next. They ran to the place where I met them. I could see that the sun came out and it was early dawn. I poked my head through some straw. I could see them clearly. They ran into the hole that the leader stood next to. I ran to it once they were gone. I poked my head into the tunnel and saw them acting weird. They seemed like they were having a seizure. Then suddenly their skin turned blue. Their fire turned into flowers. Their claws turned into soft fingers. I heard a noise coming from behind me. I turned around and I saw a small bulborb. The bulborb strayed from it's pack. It seemed like it was very young. I stood there but it just took a bite out of me shoe! I was about to yell, but I covered my mouth. Now I was a little angry at it. I checked on the pikmin. They stopped. I was surprised. They turned around and caught me in the act of spying on them. The young bulborb was quite satisfied and walked away. I was ready to pound it but the pikmin ran towards me. I was afraid that they’d attack me, but it was quite the opposite. Instead they ran to me and waited for commands. "What mood-swingers!" I complained. But of course they couldn't understand. I assumed that the pikmin turn into black pikmin at night. "They don't even remember it either. That must be how they survive at night."


I must remember that I shouldn't leave any pikmin out at night! I looked around. "Which way was the way back to the onion?" I pondered. Everything seemed so un-familiar. I looked at the intersection. "Was it left or right?" I took the left. The pikmin followed. I took right at the next 2 intersections. I saw the exit! I ran out of the bush maze and onto hard concrete. The pikmin followed. "Wait, there wasn't concrete next to these bushes!? There was woodchips and soft dirt with several Bulborb nests!" I took a few steps forward without looking down. I was more focused on the background ahead. The pikmin didn't follow this time. They just stood there. When I did look down, I found myself on a concrete path, but it wasn't the one before. I looked around. No onion. "Where could I be?" From all that running, I lost track of where I was! Ahead was a row of buildings. I saw a sign that read "Mark Jackson, 733-4545" at the bottom, "Vandenberg Insurance Agency" in the middle and "Constellation Center" at the top. One of the doors read "ACTA". I also saw the number 38756 on the wall. "I don’t think this could be the right way…" I pondered.  
I must remember that I shouldn't leave any pikmin out at night! I looked around. "Which way was the way back to the onion?" I pondered. Everything seemed so un-familiar. I looked at the intersection. "Was it left or right?" I took the left. The pikmin followed. I took right at the next 2 intersections. I saw the exit! I ran out of the bush maze and onto hard concrete. The pikmin followed. "Wait, there wasn't concrete next to these bushes!? There was woodchips and soft dirt with several Bulborb nests!" I took a few steps forward without looking down. I was more focused on the background ahead. The pikmin didn't follow this time. They just stood there. When I did look down, I found myself on a concrete path, but it wasn't the one before. I looked around. No onion. "Where could I be?" From all that running, I lost track of where I was! Ahead was a row of buildings. I saw a sign that read "Mark Jackson, 733-4545" at the bottom, "Vandenberg Insurance Agency" in the middle and "Constellation Center" at the top. One of the doors read "ACTA". I also saw the number 38756 on the wall. "I don’t think this could be the right way…" I pondered.  


I turned back but something stood in my way. It was a Blue Snarrit! It came back for me since what I had done to the other! I wondered "Why didn't attack the pikmin behind me?" The pikmin weren't on the long black concrete path like the Blue Snarrit and I were. It chirped a loud, ear-piercing screech and it tried to bite me! I backed up but my shoulder was hit! I grasped my arm! I screamed in pain. I got back up and ran for it after that. It followed me. Although it was much faster than me! It pushed me back to the black strip of concrete. Then I heard a noise. It was the honk of a car!  
I turned back but something stood in my way. It was a Blue Snarrit! It came back for me since what I had done to the other! I wondered "Why didn't attack the pikmin behind me?" The pikmin weren't on the long black concrete path like the Blue Snarrit and I were. It chirped a loud, ear-piercing screech and it tried to bite me! I backed up but my shoulder was hit! I grasped my arm! I screamed in pain. I got back up and ran for it after that. It followed me. Although it was much faster than me! It pushed me back to the black strip of concrete. Then I heard a noise. It was the honk of a car!  


Part 3: Stolen
Part 3: Stolen


I knew my fate was concealed at that moment! I stood no chance at survival. I tried running out of the way. The Snarrit just chirped and flew out of harms way. I stood, paralyzed in fear. I stood in it's way. I tried to run but it was too large and fast to escape! I jumped to the side and ducked. It went right over my head. I was safe. I ran back out of the road and onto the sidewalk, where the pikmin were. I would rather not risk my chances on that road again. I decided to take my chances trying to reach the ship instead. I noticed the big cars hadn't driven onto the sidewalk so I knew I was safe. The creatures' cars were much like the ones on Hocotate. I headed back the way I came and the pikmin made their usual "Meh-oh-ah" and followed. But everything seemed all to unfamiliar. I hadn't remembered the bushes in that form. And I remembered a large burrow made by a Burrowing Snagret which wasn't there any longer. I was getting worried. We traveled for a few hours.  
I knew my fate was concealed at that moment! I stood no chance at survival. I tried running out of the way. The Snarrit just chirped and flew out of harms way. I stood, paralyzed in fear. I stood in it's way. I tried to run but it was too large and fast to escape! I jumped to the side and ducked. It went right over my head. I was safe. I ran back out of the road and onto the sidewalk, where the pikmin were. I would rather not risk my chances on that road again. I decided to take my chances trying to reach the ship instead. I noticed the big cars hadn't driven onto the sidewalk so I knew I was safe. The creatures' cars were much like the ones on Hocotate. I headed back the way I came and the pikmin made their usual "Meh-oh-ah" and followed. But everything seemed all to unfamiliar. I hadn't remembered the bushes in that form. And I remembered a large burrow made by a Burrowing Snagret which wasn't there any longer. I was getting worried. We traveled for a few hours.  


We always took the right because I took the left on the way here. After a while of traveling, I found the pikmins' onion! A blue onion! I suddenly felt much better. Now I can raise my chances of survival by gaining more pikmin. And now I won't have to risk my six pikmin transforming into black pikmin again. They day was beginning to get dark. It seemed to be around 5:00. I hadn't noticed the time go by. I put the pikmin back in the onion and headed out. I knew I could probably fit inside the onion, but I decided not to. This time, I didn't go to far. I always stayed in-sight of the onion. I just stood far enough to examine the wild-life in their own habitats. As the sun rose, I called the pikmin out of their onions. And a few moments later, we were off again. I had no idea where, though.  
We always took the right because I took the left on the way here. After a while of traveling, I found the pikmins' onion! A blue onion! I suddenly felt much better. Now I can raise my chances of survival by gaining more pikmin. And now I won't have to risk my six pikmin transforming into black pikmin again. They day was beginning to get dark. It seemed to be around 5:00. I hadn't noticed the time go by. I put the pikmin back in the onion and headed out. I knew I could probably fit inside the onion, but I decided not to. This time, I didn't go to far. I always stayed in-sight of the onion. I just stood far enough to examine the wild-life in their own habitats. As the sun rose, I called the pikmin out of their onions. And a few moments later, we were off again. I had no idea where, though.  
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This was my chance. Most all the giants were in their classes. I had to hurry! Who knows when they'll be back! I jumped out of the grass and ran to the west I thought it would be the way to the exit. But I was way off!  
This was my chance. Most all the giants were in their classes. I had to hurry! Who knows when they'll be back! I jumped out of the grass and ran to the west I thought it would be the way to the exit. But I was way off!  


Part 4: Sighting of the Ship
Part 4: Sighting of the Ship


I hurried to the right. I ran across a long, tall, painted wall. Near the middle of the building from which the wall stood, were two barrels and a doorway. I rushed past them but when I got near the second barrel, a giant foot came crashing down at me and I flew right into a small gutter near the door! I came rolling down into the gutter and fell about 12 feet off a steep ledge into the murky water. It seemed like I was in the middle of a sewage pipe-line. I had encountered one of these before. Only I had pikmin with me, and it want’s as littered.  
I hurried to the right. I ran across a long, tall, painted wall. Near the middle of the building from which the wall stood, were two barrels and a doorway. I rushed past them but when I got near the second barrel, a giant foot came crashing down at me and I flew right into a small gutter near the door! I came rolling down into the gutter and fell about 12 feet off a steep ledge into the murky water. It seemed like I was in the middle of a sewage pipe-line. I had encountered one of these before. Only I had pikmin with me, and it want’s as littered.  


There were tons of small, gooey pieces of crumbs and hair and junk all over the area. I walked forward along a pipe. I came upon several intersections and pipes and I encountered several new, and dangerous species while here. "If only I had my journal with me!" After a ways, I came upon a large mound of grass and sand. It looked like a garden. Light shone down on  it from an opening above and I noticed several flowers growing upon it and Unmarked Spectralids flew above them. I walked up to it and the unmarked Spectralids flew away and out of the pipe-lines from that hole on the ceiling. Then it came to me! "What if I found away through that hole that they flew out of?" Just at that moment, I noticed a tall flower growing on a patch of sand that just about reached the height of the hole!  
There were tons of small, gooey pieces of crumbs and hair and junk all over the area. I walked forward along a pipe. I came upon several intersections and pipes and I encountered several new, and dangerous species while here. "If only I had my journal with me!" After a ways, I came upon a large mound of grass and sand. It looked like a garden. Light shone down on  it from an opening above and I noticed several flowers growing upon it and Unmarked Spectralids flew above them. I walked up to it and the unmarked Spectralids flew away and out of the pipe-lines from that hole on the ceiling. Then it came to me! "What if I found away through that hole that they flew out of?" Just at that moment, I noticed a tall flower growing on a patch of sand that just about reached the height of the hole!  
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I climbed the flower and swung it back and forth so that I could grab onto the hole. I extended one arm while using the other to hold on. WOOSH! I swung past it! WOOSH! I swung back. WOOSH! Even closer this time! WOOSH! I was so close, I could feel the cold air brush against my arm! WOOSH! At that moment I made a jump for it, and by a tiny inch, I grabbed on! But loose gravel un-mounded and I loss my grip! I plunged deep below! As I hit the hard ground where the flower grew, my weight over exceeded the capacity and I plunged even deeper! I screamed as I fell. I looked down and noticed an empty chasm! Suddenly my arm grabbed onto an extended pipe and I pulled myself back up! But when I stood on the pipe that saved me I tripped and slid down it. Water poured down it. I slid all the way to the bottom with which I fell of and landed on a hard surface. Solid ground! Finally I had made it out of the pipes! Even though I wouldn't have been in that situation if one of those giants hadn't kicked me in the first place!
I climbed the flower and swung it back and forth so that I could grab onto the hole. I extended one arm while using the other to hold on. WOOSH! I swung past it! WOOSH! I swung back. WOOSH! Even closer this time! WOOSH! I was so close, I could feel the cold air brush against my arm! WOOSH! At that moment I made a jump for it, and by a tiny inch, I grabbed on! But loose gravel un-mounded and I loss my grip! I plunged deep below! As I hit the hard ground where the flower grew, my weight over exceeded the capacity and I plunged even deeper! I screamed as I fell. I looked down and noticed an empty chasm! Suddenly my arm grabbed onto an extended pipe and I pulled myself back up! But when I stood on the pipe that saved me I tripped and slid down it. Water poured down it. I slid all the way to the bottom with which I fell of and landed on a hard surface. Solid ground! Finally I had made it out of the pipes! Even though I wouldn't have been in that situation if one of those giants hadn't kicked me in the first place!


I walked along. I saw a large set of stairs and a pathway leading downward. I turned around and saw a parking lot on the right and another pathway on the left. In the middle seemed to be a large patch of some new, green plants. And out of the corner of my eye, I saw... The big walls where my pikmin were! They had to be there! I ran towards them but was stopped by the sight of a car coming toward me! I fled and hid under on the weird plants. I saw two giants come out! And one had a backpack with my ship on it! I knew I had to chase it! But I couldn't just leave my pikmin behind! I had to go back, but not after following that giant who has my ship!  
I walked along. I saw a large set of stairs and a pathway leading downward. I turned around and saw a parking lot on the right and another pathway on the left. In the middle seemed to be a large patch of some new, green plants. And out of the corner of my eye, I saw... The big walls where my pikmin were! They had to be there! I ran towards them but was stopped by the sight of a car coming toward me! I fled and hid under on the weird plants. I saw two giants come out! And one had a backpack with my ship on it! I knew I had to chase it! But I couldn't just leave my pikmin behind! I had to go back, but not after following that giant who has my ship!  


I had to know where he kept his backpack and my ship. If I went there and speculated the location of my ship, I could risk the life of my pikmin and myself!  
I had to know where he kept his backpack and my ship. If I went there and speculated the location of my ship, I could risk the life of my pikmin and myself!  
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He went passed the curtains just as I did. He went into a door on the far right Just as I did. We seemed to have just passed the living room. There were a whole load of giant vases in there. When I went in the room on the far right of the living room, I came into the kitchen. There was a giant table on the left and a row of countertops. I could see a refrigerator on the far left corner of the room. The giant was searching in it. It was still wearing its backpack. What I needed to know was where the giant keeps its backpack! That way I could just rush back, get the pikmin, and rush back and get my ship!
He went passed the curtains just as I did. He went into a door on the far right Just as I did. We seemed to have just passed the living room. There were a whole load of giant vases in there. When I went in the room on the far right of the living room, I came into the kitchen. There was a giant table on the left and a row of countertops. I could see a refrigerator on the far left corner of the room. The giant was searching in it. It was still wearing its backpack. What I needed to know was where the giant keeps its backpack! That way I could just rush back, get the pikmin, and rush back and get my ship!


I followed it back to the hallway and into the first door on the left, his room. It walked passed its bed and threw its backpack down onto it! "So that's where he keeps it!" I said. So I ran back to the front door where I came in but something horrible had happened! The door was closed! And the door knob was too high to reach it! I ran back to the giant's room and peeked inside. He was typing something on its computer. On his computer it said his user name was "Pikmin_789?!". I wonder how he knew about pikmin?!  
I followed it back to the hallway and into the first door on the left, his room. It walked passed its bed and threw its backpack down onto it! "So that's where he keeps it!" I said. So I ran back to the front door where I came in but something horrible had happened! The door was closed! And the door knob was too high to reach it! I ran back to the giant's room and peeked inside. He was typing something on its computer. On his computer it said his user name was "Pikmin_789?!". I wonder how he knew about pikmin?!  


Anyway, next to his computer I saw a window! An open window! "But how was I going to get up there?" Suddenly it came to me! I'd have to climb up there! I jumped onto a teddy bear sitting on the floor next to a stack ob boxes on the left side of the door, right against the wall. I climbed the boxes and turned to see the giant. Still typing. "Good!" I turned around and climbed up a videogame controller and jumped onto the neck of a table-lamp. I climbed up that and jumped off the head of the lamp, onto a table that had no full surface. The surface was just a bunch of clay lines intersecting each other. When I got onto it, I climbed up the wires of the TV on the table. When I reached the top I climbed up the antenna. I could see the window right in front of me! I jumped and made a grab for the window. "Yes!" I got it! I climbed back on and ran for it!  
Anyway, next to his computer I saw a window! An open window! "But how was I going to get up there?" Suddenly it came to me! I'd have to climb up there! I jumped onto a teddy bear sitting on the floor next to a stack ob boxes on the left side of the door, right against the wall. I climbed the boxes and turned to see the giant. Still typing. "Good!" I turned around and climbed up a videogame controller and jumped onto the neck of a table-lamp. I climbed up that and jumped off the head of the lamp, onto a table that had no full surface. The surface was just a bunch of clay lines intersecting each other. When I got onto it, I climbed up the wires of the TV on the table. When I reached the top I climbed up the antenna. I could see the window right in front of me! I jumped and made a grab for the window. "Yes!" I got it! I climbed back on and ran for it!  
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We jumped down to the floor and ran to the glass door, which was open. We carefully walked inside. We hid behind plants and vases occasionally. I noticed a treasure I had seen before which my ship named the "Possessed Squash," sitting on a table we passed under. We ran to the giant's room, which I already knew the location of from the past "reconnaissance task". When we entered the room, I noticed the bed in front of us with the back pack laying on it. But to our displeasure, the ship was gone!  
We jumped down to the floor and ran to the glass door, which was open. We carefully walked inside. We hid behind plants and vases occasionally. I noticed a treasure I had seen before which my ship named the "Possessed Squash," sitting on a table we passed under. We ran to the giant's room, which I already knew the location of from the past "reconnaissance task". When we entered the room, I noticed the bed in front of us with the back pack laying on it. But to our displeasure, the ship was gone!  


Part 5: Scorpon Territory
Part 5: Scorpon Territory


I lay in awe of what had stood before me...and that was a backpack without my ship on it! Suddenly we heard a noise and we all turned at once. It was the giant! But this time, the giant was with another giant! I jumped under the bed. I looked back at the pikmin. They were just standing there, murmuring their usual noises. I couldn't believe they just stood like that! But the giants' feet loomed over them and landed infront of them. The giants didn't seem to notice them. While they walked over to the desk with the computer on it, I noticed something in one of their hands. It was my ship! One giant swung it around while the other sat down and began typing. I commanded my pikmin to hide like I did. I couldn't understand their strange language at all but I saw numerous images of ships and saucers of all kinds on the computer. Some larger than my own ship! The giant with the ship turned around and took a glimpse of a pikmin! But I grabbed it and pulled it back. The giant just shrugged and turned back around.  
I lay in awe of what had stood before me...and that was a backpack without my ship on it! Suddenly we heard a noise and we all turned at once. It was the giant! But this time, the giant was with another giant! I jumped under the bed. I looked back at the pikmin. They were just standing there, murmuring their usual noises. I couldn't believe they just stood like that! But the giants' feet loomed over them and landed infront of them. The giants didn't seem to notice them. While they walked over to the desk with the computer on it, I noticed something in one of their hands. It was my ship! One giant swung it around while the other sat down and began typing. I commanded my pikmin to hide like I did. I couldn't understand their strange language at all but I saw numerous images of ships and saucers of all kinds on the computer. Some larger than my own ship! The giant with the ship turned around and took a glimpse of a pikmin! But I grabbed it and pulled it back. The giant just shrugged and turned back around.  


I heard them talking to one another (even though I still couldn't understand them). They walked past us and out the door. I heard them packing (putting on) their supplies (socks and shoes). We quickly followed, but laid low. Eventually, they opened the front door! "Here's my chance!" I quickly escorted my pikmin out the door when they opened it. The door began to close and my and two green pikmin were still inside the building! I threw the two and leaped out the door. "Close call!" I followed them, but it was hard...being that they were so fast.  
I heard them talking to one another (even though I still couldn't understand them). They walked past us and out the door. I heard them packing (putting on) their supplies (socks and shoes). We quickly followed, but laid low. Eventually, they opened the front door! "Here's my chance!" I quickly escorted my pikmin out the door when they opened it. The door began to close and my and two green pikmin were still inside the building! I threw the two and leaped out the door. "Close call!" I followed them, but it was hard...being that they were so fast.  
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When we reached approximately seventy feet from the sidewalk a Giant Scorpon burst out of the sand like a Snagret! It pushed us away and revealed itself to us. It was orange in color, had six horns on its back, had two claws like the Armored Scorpon, and had six segments on its back rather than five. But above all, it was much larger! It was a bit bigger than the Empress Bulblax! But not so obese. It threw its huge claw at us and hit an orange pikmin! The pikmin died. The Scorpon (named Raging Scorpon) threw its other arm at the grey pikmin and its tail at the white pikmin! The grey pikmin dodged and the tail just barely missed the white pikmin. Meanwhile, I threw my pikmin rapidly at its back but the Scorpons's back was to smooth and hard to attack. It was as if it was wearing metal armor.
When we reached approximately seventy feet from the sidewalk a Giant Scorpon burst out of the sand like a Snagret! It pushed us away and revealed itself to us. It was orange in color, had six horns on its back, had two claws like the Armored Scorpon, and had six segments on its back rather than five. But above all, it was much larger! It was a bit bigger than the Empress Bulblax! But not so obese. It threw its huge claw at us and hit an orange pikmin! The pikmin died. The Scorpon (named Raging Scorpon) threw its other arm at the grey pikmin and its tail at the white pikmin! The grey pikmin dodged and the tail just barely missed the white pikmin. Meanwhile, I threw my pikmin rapidly at its back but the Scorpons's back was to smooth and hard to attack. It was as if it was wearing metal armor.


All my pikmin began swarming it at once, which didn't make it too happy. It dove into the sand. My pikmin stood their confused, except the grey pikmin. It ran to the right and the Scorpon dove out of the ground on the right side. Its left claw swung into the air and flicked a green pikmin into the air! As the pikmin fell back down, the Scorpon opened its secret mouth, which wasn't such a secret any more. Just then I hatched a plan! I grabbed the light blue pikmin and threw him at the green pikmin! The pikmin tightened himself to get maximum speed. The two pikmin collided in mid-air and landed safetly on the sand, not inside the scorpons mouth. That made it greatly furious. At that moment I called the pikmin with my whistle and ran for the side walk. It charged us and bumped into a rock that we went around. We finally touched the sidewalk! Out of Scorpon territory! The Raging Scorpon shrieked and burrowed away. "Man, Scorpons are more territorial than Dweevils and Bulborbs combined!"
All my pikmin began swarming it at once, which didn't make it too happy. It dove into the sand. My pikmin stood their confused, except the grey pikmin. It ran to the right and the Scorpon dove out of the ground on the right side. Its left claw swung into the air and flicked a green pikmin into the air! As the pikmin fell back down, the Scorpon opened its secret mouth, which wasn't such a secret any more. Just then I hatched a plan! I grabbed the light blue pikmin and threw him at the green pikmin! The pikmin tightened himself to get maximum speed. The two pikmin collided in mid-air and landed safetly on the sand, not inside the scorpons mouth. That made it greatly furious. At that moment I called the pikmin with my whistle and ran for the side walk. It charged us and bumped into a rock that we went around. We finally touched the sidewalk! Out of Scorpon territory! The Raging Scorpon shrieked and burrowed away. "Man, Scorpons are more territorial than Dweevils and Bulborbs combined!"


We walked a ways on the sidewalk. "I wonder where the giants went." I said. We walked past a patch of tall weeds. "Are we going the right way? Did the giants go this way?" I asked the grey pikmin but it just tilted it's head and said "Meh." We walked further. "I think the giants took a different route." I said. Just then I saw the giants heading my way. They were talking and holding the ship up in the air as if it was transparent. We ducked and their feet flew overhead. They walked past us, still talking, still ingoring us. The pikmin and I chased them but stopped at the edge of the sidewalk. the giants walked back the way they came. Through Scorpon territory!
We walked a ways on the sidewalk. "I wonder where the giants went." I said. We walked past a patch of tall weeds. "Are we going the right way? Did the giants go this way?" I asked the grey pikmin but it just tilted it's head and said "Meh." We walked further. "I think the giants took a different route." I said. Just then I saw the giants heading my way. They were talking and holding the ship up in the air as if it was transparent. We ducked and their feet flew overhead. They walked past us, still talking, still ingoring us. The pikmin and I chased them but stopped at the edge of the sidewalk. the giants walked back the way they came. Through Scorpon territory!


Part 6: On the road to Hocotate
Part 6: On the road to Hocotate


"We had just barely survived last time! How in the world are we supposed to go through it again?!" I shouted. Out of the corner of my eye, I could see a blue light. I rubbed my helmet and looked again. It was gone. So then I commanded my pikmin to run as fast as we could, which was easy for the light blue pikmin. The Scorpons were quite faster and took two green pikmin! Other than that, we escaped. The scorpons may have chased us and took two pikmin, but we made it to the sidewalk on the other side. By now, we were all out of breath, and by all, I mean myself. The pikmin are never tired. The Giants were far ahead, but we managed to catch up.  
"We had just barely survived last time! How in the world are we supposed to go through it again?!" I shouted. Out of the corner of my eye, I could see a blue light. I rubbed my helmet and looked again. It was gone. So then I commanded my pikmin to run as fast as we could, which was easy for the light blue pikmin. The Scorpons were quite faster and took two green pikmin! Other than that, we escaped. The scorpons may have chased us and took two pikmin, but we made it to the sidewalk on the other side. By now, we were all out of breath, and by all, I mean myself. The pikmin are never tired. The Giants were far ahead, but we managed to catch up.  


When we got to the stairs that lead up to the corridor that lead to its house, we went the other way around like we did last time. We climbed up the tree, and jumped onto the balcony, and ran to the giant's room.We hid under the bed again. I could hear the two giants talking. Eventually, the giants went out of the room. That's when we went in to get it.  
When we got to the stairs that lead up to the corridor that lead to its house, we went the other way around like we did last time. We climbed up the tree, and jumped onto the balcony, and ran to the giant's room.We hid under the bed again. I could hear the two giants talking. Eventually, the giants went out of the room. That's when we went in to get it.  
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I kept moving further. Eventually I fought a Decorated Cannon Beetle. Eventually I reached the crash site. I found a treasure that my ship deamed "Delectible Arrowhead". I followed the north path. I found two treasures after a while. "Building Blocks of Age", and the "Dreams of Magnificence". I reached the Dweevil nest, headed backward a little, and crossed onto the sidewalk. I walked past the dweevil nest. "It isn't that windy today," I said.  
I kept moving further. Eventually I fought a Decorated Cannon Beetle. Eventually I reached the crash site. I found a treasure that my ship deamed "Delectible Arrowhead". I followed the north path. I found two treasures after a while. "Building Blocks of Age", and the "Dreams of Magnificence". I reached the Dweevil nest, headed backward a little, and crossed onto the sidewalk. I walked past the dweevil nest. "It isn't that windy today," I said.  


I kept going down the sidewalk. I evntually reached the crosswalk, but I kept going past it. I saw many old creatures living near the side of the sidewalk. I past them and noticed something. An Onion! A red onion!!!
 
I kept going down the sidewalk. I evntually reached the crosswalk, but I kept going past it. I saw many old creatures living near the side of the sidewalk. I past them and noticed something. An Onion! A red onion!!!


I ran off the sidewalk and to the onion. I could only see the top of it because the rest is hidden behind a bush. When I reached it I called the pikmin out. The only thing was, there was no pikmin there! "Someone must've took the pikmin out already! But who?" I searched for any sign of someone. Nothing. I shrugged and moved along, looking for a sign of Louie. "Louie, where are you?!"  
I ran off the sidewalk and to the onion. I could only see the top of it because the rest is hidden behind a bush. When I reached it I called the pikmin out. The only thing was, there was no pikmin there! "Someone must've took the pikmin out already! But who?" I searched for any sign of someone. Nothing. I shrugged and moved along, looking for a sign of Louie. "Louie, where are you?!"  
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Part 9: Catching Up
Part 9: Catching Up


"Louie what happened to you? Where were you?!" I asked.  
"Louie what happened to you? Where were you?!" I asked.  


"I was in my ship, looking for you, when I incidently forgot to fill the gas tank, so I crashed. Then I saw you, so I called you but you didn't answer me. I tried to run to you but there was a bush in the way. When I got around it you where gone." he replied.  
"I was in my ship, looking for you, when I incidently forgot to fill the gas tank, so I crashed. Then I saw you, so I called you but you didn't answer me. I tried to run to you but there was a bush in the way. When I got around it you where gone." he replied.  
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"Well, now that we're back together, let's get in the ship and head back to hocotate!"
"Well, now that we're back together, let's get in the ship and head back to hocotate!"


"Okay, but we'll need to take this treasure too. I'm sure it'll be worth a lot." He said. We both were looking at a huge marbel. It was clear purple, and it shimmered in the sunlight. We took the marbel to the ship, protecting the pikmin carrying it. When we reached where I had landed my ship, we both noticed one thing... That my ship was gone!!!
"Okay, but we'll need to take this treasure too. I'm sure it'll be worth a lot." He said. We both were looking at a huge marbel. It was clear purple, and it shimmered in the sunlight. We took the marbel to the ship, protecting the pikmin carrying it. When we reached where I had landed my ship, we both noticed one thing... That my ship was gone!!!


"Where's the ship?!" I pondered angerly! "Now how are we going to get back! First a giant took my ship, then I got attacked by scorpons, now my ship's gone again, what next?!"  
"Where's the ship?!" I pondered angerly! "Now how are we going to get back! First a giant took my ship, then I got attacked by scorpons, now my ship's gone again, what next?!"  


"I'm sure we'll - Wait, WHAT?!" Louie asked.  
"I'm sure we'll - Wait, WHAT?!" Louie asked.  


"I'll tell you later. Right now we need that ship, and I know just the place it'll be!" So we put the marbel down and head back, onto the sidewalk. Eventually we got to the crosswalk and we crossed. After crossing we went down the prking lot, and back onto the sidewalk. Down the steps, onto the grass, up the tree, and onto the balcony.  
"I'll tell you later. Right now we need that ship, and I know just the place it'll be!" So we put the marbel down and head back, onto the sidewalk. Eventually we got to the crosswalk and we crossed. After crossing we went down the prking lot, and back onto the sidewalk. Down the steps, onto the grass, up the tree, and onto the balcony.  
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"Are they still friendly, Olimar"
"Are they still friendly, Olimar"


"Let's say that it's a good idea to stand back."
"Let's say that it's a good idea to stand back."


Suddenly the pikmin jumped and us. Me and Louie ran for it. The 65 pikmin chased us until we reached the giants. Me and Louie hid under a rock. "What's going on Olimar? Why are those pikmin chasing us? Why does that Giant have your ship? Tell, me now!" He yelled infuriatingly!
Suddenly the pikmin jumped and us. Me and Louie ran for it. The 65 pikmin chased us until we reached the giants. Me and Louie hid under a rock. "What's going on Olimar? Why are those pikmin chasing us? Why does that Giant have your ship? Tell, me now!" He yelled infuriatingly!
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"WOW! I'm surprised your still in one piece! What happened to me was nothing compared to what happened to you!"
"WOW! I'm surprised your still in one piece! What happened to me was nothing compared to what happened to you!"
He shouted. That gave away our hiding spot and a pikmin jumped onto Louie! Louie managed to shake them off and we were running again. "Look, Louie! The sun's back!" We watched as the sun rose and the pikmin turned back to normal. "Now which way did those giants go?" ...
He shouted. That gave away our hiding spot and a pikmin jumped onto Louie! Louie managed to shake them off and we were running again. "Look, Louie! The sun's back!" We watched as the sun rose and the pikmin turned back to normal. "Now which way did those giants go?" ...


"Crud!"  
"Crud!"  
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When we reached there, we stuffed the marbel in the cargo hold of the ship and jumped into the cockpit, and flew off. "I'm going to miss those cute, little, pikmin." I said as the planet got smaller and smaller until I couldn't see it anymore.  
When we reached there, we stuffed the marbel in the cargo hold of the ship and jumped into the cockpit, and flew off. "I'm going to miss those cute, little, pikmin." I said as the planet got smaller and smaller until I couldn't see it anymore.  


Part 11: Battle of Man vs Machine
Part 11: Battle of Man vs Machine===


We eventually landed on Hocotate. The president was waiting there. "Finally you're back. Glad to see you again, Louie. Anyway, I wan't both of you to unload that cargo, no flying off again either!" The president disciplined. The president walked back to the company building while me and Louie unloaded the treasure (no pikmin in sight). Suddenly, Louie fell back. He dropped the shaking treasure. It was that marbel! It began violently vibrating among the floor. It wasn't a marbel after all! It was an egg! The president turned around.  
We eventually landed on Hocotate. The president was waiting there. "Finally you're back. Glad to see you again, Louie. Anyway, I wan't both of you to unload that cargo, no flying off again either!" The president disciplined. The president walked back to the company building while me and Louie unloaded the treasure (no pikmin in sight). Suddenly, Louie fell back. He dropped the shaking treasure. It was that marbel! It began violently vibrating among the floor. It wasn't a marbel after all! It was an egg! The president turned around.  
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He was very tough "If only I hadn’t picked up that egg, thinking it was a treasure. Stupid, Louie!" I thought to myself. "If it uses electricity, than the only way to get to it was to use…" I wondered. "Use what? What?!" And then it came to me! "Rubber! Rubber conducts electricity! My suit is made out of rubber (and meatal)!" So I simply walked up to it and threw my hand into its mechanical pipes and pulled out a red pipe. The pipe began letting out steam and the creature shrieked! It swung it’s one of it’s leg at me and kicked me back! I got back up and threw my hand back into him. He kicked again but I dodged and pulled out a second pipe. They were both letting out steam. The creature shrieked again. All while this was happening, Louie and the president were watching.
He was very tough "If only I hadn’t picked up that egg, thinking it was a treasure. Stupid, Louie!" I thought to myself. "If it uses electricity, than the only way to get to it was to use…" I wondered. "Use what? What?!" And then it came to me! "Rubber! Rubber conducts electricity! My suit is made out of rubber (and meatal)!" So I simply walked up to it and threw my hand into its mechanical pipes and pulled out a red pipe. The pipe began letting out steam and the creature shrieked! It swung it’s one of it’s leg at me and kicked me back! I got back up and threw my hand back into him. He kicked again but I dodged and pulled out a second pipe. They were both letting out steam. The creature shrieked again. All while this was happening, Louie and the president were watching.


The creature drew out an engine-like machine from it’s face and attached a pipe to it’s front right leg. It turned to face me and began breathing fire on me! I jumped out of the way but my waist and down were scorched. I screamed in agony. I managed to get up but the pain pulled me down. "If only I had a pikmin!" I crawled back up and moved behind a rock. The rock acted as a shield from the fire. I had to find way out of this! Then it came to me again. "It felt pain when I messed with its machinery so I just have to... have to... have to... Have to what?"  
The creature drew out an engine-like machine from it’s face and attached a pipe to it’s front right leg. It turned to face me and began breathing fire on me! I jumped out of the way but my waist and down were scorched. I screamed in agony. I managed to get up but the pain pulled me down. "If only I had a pikmin!" I crawled back up and moved behind a rock. The rock acted as a shield from the fire. I had to find way out of this! Then it came to me again. "It felt pain when I messed with its machinery so I just have to... have to... have to... Have to what?"  


"It must gain energy when it pumps electricity into it’s legs. So I just have to break it’s legs and it’ll be defenseless!" I carefully crawled away from the rock, hoping it wouldn’t see me. When I managed to reach it’s legs I puched them as hard as I could. That bent them but not enough. The creature turned around and kicked me extremely hard. I rolled along the ground, but I got up and charged at it. It blew fire at me but I dodged and rammed it's legs. They snapped in-two and it came crashing down with a huge explosion. Four parts of him went flying into the air and landed near Louie and the president.  
"It must gain energy when it pumps electricity into it’s legs. So I just have to break it’s legs and it’ll be defenseless!" I carefully crawled away from the rock, hoping it wouldn’t see me. When I managed to reach it’s legs I puched them as hard as I could. That bent them but not enough. The creature turned around and kicked me extremely hard. I rolled along the ground, but I got up and charged at it. It blew fire at me but I dodged and rammed it's legs. They snapped in-two and it came crashing down with a huge explosion. Four parts of him went flying into the air and landed near Louie and the president.  


They included a small engine, a small propeller, and an electrical pump. I pushed the three to the back of our ship and the ship recorded it as worth one-thousand pokos each! Our dept soon went from critical to normal. Now we had fully re-paid our dept and were back on buisiness. Now that we all were back safe and sound, the pikmin were back in their own home, and our dept was gone, everything went back to normal. Although, a few things were different. I got promoted to treasure collector, Louie took my old job, and the Hocotate Frieght Shipping Company's business sky-rocketted. We were all happy. Except me because I had to clean up all the goo from the mess!
They included a small engine, a small propeller, and an electrical pump. I pushed the three to the back of our ship and the ship recorded it as worth one-thousand pokos each! Our dept soon went from critical to normal. Now we had fully re-paid our dept and were back on buisiness. Now that we all were back safe and sound, the pikmin were back in their own home, and our dept was gone, everything went back to normal. Although, a few things were different. I got promoted to treasure collector, Louie took my old job, and the Hocotate Frieght Shipping Company's business sky-rocketted. We were all happy. Except me because I had to clean up all the goo from the mess!
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- [[user:Pikmin 7890|Pikmin 7890]]
- [[user:Pikmin 7890|Pikmin 7890]]


==Volcano Pikmin ==
==Volcano Pikmin ==
Volcano pikmin are encountered in Volcano island and is immune to lava and blow their tops when
Volcano Pikmin are incountered                          Volcano Pikmin
startled. [[User: Brittonbubba|Britton]][[User talk: Brittonbubba|bubba]]
on Volcano's island and are immune     Scientific Name: Unknown
to lava, and blow their top when                 family: Pikmin
Thretened!                                        areas: Volcano's island


==ff==
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i think ive seen the fanfic before... {{user:rocky0718/sig2}}
i think ive seen the fanfic before... {{user:rocky0718/sig2}}
Go figure...[[User:PikminTy|ReplayTy]]
Can we please put that under a collapsible table? {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}
:Be my guest.--{{User:Prezintenden/sig}}
::Don't know how. Green usually does that stuff. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}
:::Done.{{User:Greenpickle/sig}}
== Pikmin 3 FAKE Walkthrough ==
On Gamefaqs Hinsburg has a FAKE Pikmin 3 Walkthrough that has more than I could ever expect from the sequel, seeing as how they'll make it easier for the casual audience instead of brutally harder, which this fake version is. My only problem is that you can't play as Louie in it, and I don't like the idea of Pink Pikmin, I'd rather have Green or maybe Black. Check it out anyways. [[User:Portal-Kombat|<span style="color:blue">Portal-</span>]][[User_talk:Portal-Kombat|<span style="color:orange">Kombat</span>]]
give us the link--[[File:Snowy bulborb user signature.png|x30px]]'''[[User:Snowy bulborb|<span style="color:blue">Snowy</span>]] [[User talk:Snowy bulborb|<span style="color:green">Bulborb</span>]]'''
Oops. That's pretty important. Here it is:  http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/genmessage.php?board=589374&topic=43316624  So... what do you think? [[User:Portal-Kombat|<span style="color:blue">Portal-</span>]][[User_talk:Portal-Kombat|<span style="color:orange">Kombat</span>]]
== Playing at Night==
I have a good idea for black pikmin.
When you beat a certain boss you get an item
(helmet light). This light goes on olimar's
head and then he can see in the dark so he can
play at night. When you play at night you find
a '''BLACK ONION''' with 10 '''BLACK PIKMIN''' near it
The black pikmin are very strong (1.5 times as strong and heavy as purples)
They are as fast as reds and they have a dying leaf/bud/flower and two red
eyes (to see in the dark)
''When playing at night there are 2-3 times as much enemies
but you have the blacks which are strong.''
NOTE: the enemies can't enter the onion area {{user:Unknown_12/sig}}
**I think that the story should be similar to Pikmin 2, except with olimar having to repay his house rent with his son.--[[User:Zakkoroen|<font color="black">Batman ( Zakkoroen)</font>]]<sup>[[User Talk:Zakkoroen|<font color="yellow">The Batcave.</font>]]</sup><sup>[[Special:Contributions/Zakkoroen|<font color="magenta">Batcomputer.</font>]]</sup> 16:37, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
:What, collecting treasures to repay another debt? You don't think they should change it up a little? {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}}
Hey dude I had already made black pikmin. They are like white pikmin but they have swords (LOL).- P
:When you browse threads like these, you realize that a lot of people come up with similar, if not identical ideas. I for one can imagine Black Pikmin with flowers like black-eyed Susans. {{user:Jimbo Jambo/sig}} 06:29, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
==Unknown 12 Story Idea==
I think that the story should be about His boss having louie and olimar go back to the pikmin planet to get something else with the pikmin. NOT TREASURE! It should be something like objects for something. Here is what I think the story should be like:
Olimar and Louie and the prez return to their home planet. They sell the remaining stuff and they find a <span style=color:red;>'''RED PIKMIN ''' <span style=color:black;> on the ship that stowed away with them (they left the purple and whites behind on the planet). They realize that they must go back to the distant planet to get the pikmin back home cause the pikmin can't breathe on their home planet. They return to the planet to take the pikmin back.
BUT.... Olimar's son sneaks his way on the ship and gets lost on the planet. They must now find olimar's son. The pikmin must collect items above/underground to get to new areas and stuff like that. To get back his son from the distant planet they need to use a tracker that shows were he is exactly (Olimar placed it on him when he noticed that his son was with him) but he was snatched by a red bulborb taking the tracker thing and ripping it apart and throwing it around the place giveing the parts to the child bulborbs and they took them away!
Olimar tries to chase the bulborb but he is no match of it and the bulborb children attack him. He wakes long after being attacked and his son and the parts of the tracker are long gone.
The object is for olimar to have the pikmin (6-7 different colors) collect the parts of the tracker (There are 50 parts). Then to find his son which will be guarded by the final boss (I'll let Nintendo figure out the final boss) in the final  area at the end of the final cave (Kind of like louie in pikmin 2!)
There should be 5, 6, or 7 areas. Many bosses. They should keep all the boss exept 4 and add more! Unlockable challedge mode and a new mode called cave/area maker where you can create your own cave/area with monsters onions land stuff etc.! Wi-fi mode must go on the game! And a mode where you can play at night (Explained above). And nintendo should add in anything that they think will do good in the game!
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Unknown 12 I Have to say that was an AWESOME STORYLINE. [[User: Brittonbubba|Britton]][[User Talk: Brittonbubba|bubba]]
Thanks but a bunch of the story got cut off so i will summerize it for you. After you beat the final boss he comes back to life with 3 times the power and he can use bulborbs and stuff. After you beat him you go back home and return olimars kid but... you notice that There is a new building on your planet and it says "Hocatate Zoo: where all the strangest creatures are. OPENS In 15 days. You must go back to the pikmin planet and collect all of the enimies in the game by 15 days! TO collect them you kill them and take them to your ship and they bring them back to life when they are in the zoo behind the fence. This is a second challegde mode so you don't have to do it. BUT if you do then you get to unlock a clip where it shows the zoo and people cheering it on. {{user:Unknown 12/sig}}
I think that scince it showed a variaty of onion colors at the end of the original we should use some of them.  Black Pikmin-can be set to do a task at night and will still be alive during the next day.  Orange Pikmin-Uh the initial thought is imunity to fire but reds have that already so no ideas.  Also I would like to see onions for the purple and white pikmin, or at least make the flowers more common.  I would like to not see any caves but rather a completly above ground adventure like in the first game.  I would also like to see a sense of urgancy and a time limit like the original had.  I want the sense that if you don't use the pikmin and collect the stuff you will die there.  and no one will ever know.  Basicaly I want pikmin 1 only with more pikmin colors.  '''[[User:Metroidhunter32|<span style="color:gray;">Metroidhunter32</span>]]''' 18:57, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
== RPG ==
Script:
*Distant snoring*
*CRASH!*
Olimar: Uh???
*Gets out of ship*
*Yawn*
*Louie burps*
Louie:Ohh.. What happened last night?
*Burps out poison*
Louie: It could be that poison sheargrub i ate last night or it could be...WHITE PIKMIN!!!!
*Olimar is alarmed*
Olimar: A meteor...woo h...
*Falls asleep*
*Louie uses the pee in sleep prank*
Olimar: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Hot,hot,hot,hot,hot.
*Olimar runs around ship*
Louie: Ha! Hot water Always works.
*Holds up bottle that says"nuclear hot water"*
Olimar: LOUIE!!!!
*Chases louie*
Louie: HOLY PIKPIK CARROTS, HE'S AFTER ME!!!!!
*Runs to ship and shuts off tractor beam*
*Fart*
Louie: I hope that door isn't open.
*looks*
Olimar: I'M GONNA KICK YOUR LITTLE HOCOTATIAN BUTT!
*Screams*
*Shuts door*
*Olimar crashes into the closed door*
Olimar(Muffled): GET BACK HERE, LOUIE!
*Shudders*
Louie: Just taking a shower!
*Takes off*
*Olimar gets so mad his helmet cracks under the pressure*
more coming soon...
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